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Sin was interrupted by the shot had been fired. She fell onto the floor. The people in the stadium began to move around the deck. They fell over each other trying to shear the devil Dodge. No body felt a drop on him and pushed him. It was her soldier, Beemer.
"They iight boss" Beemer said, panting suffocate. He was without that parking was made a race lenghthy especially for a big man like BMW.
"Yes, I'm fine," she did not say how Beemer helped assemble and clean the dirt from his cream-colored shirt. He looked around the yard and everything that their teams. Prime Minister and other guards with their weapons in suspecting the unexpected. But he looked around. She felt something sticky on it and without seeing what it was cleaned. Breathing a sigh of his lungs when he saw something that looked like a piece of spaghetti sauce.